Final Draft of 'The Big Dance Fight,' by K.J. the magnificent:
The Big Dance Fight
Once my freinds and me and my sister were plaing then bullys came they said do you want to dance fight. And we said it's on then we started to fight them. I steped on their feet we won!.
Just add a little punctuation, and I think we have a masterpiece:
Once my friends and me and my sister were playing. Then bully's came. They said "Do you want to dance fight?" And we said, "It's on!" Then we started to fight them. I stepped on their feet. We won!
The. End.
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